Evaluation of Peer Reviews
1.) What specific technical elements of the film opening did you dislike? I disliked the speed of the zoom at 0:56. If done slower, it would've added a more sentimental moment to the scene. Instead, it felt hurried and insignificant. Also, I'm not a fan of the transitions used to cut in between scenes. They feel immature and oddly placed. Something like a match cut or whip pan may work better for this scenario. This was originally written by Angela, and my response is that I agree with her response. This is mostly because our recording was somewhat rushed and it made the first cut look like Angela said " Immature and oddly spaced." Another thing is that the zoom was also rushed and it could have been taken more seriously due to us adding it last minute, Thankfully all of these problems were resolved in our final version of the opening film. 2.) Now for the things I dislike... I would say there are slight errors throughout this opening. Starting off, the transitions a...